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Let the bride fall down by HoneyLuxury

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critic request:

VISION, ORIGINALITY, IMPACT:
love the concept, a pure angel bride gives it a magical mood. is not the first time i see something like this, but again every time it has a different meaning.

TECHNIQUE:
Love the colors choosed, fits the overall BG.
The wings are great also for the size of the model, i would add a more blue tone to them to blend it more with the model.
Also add a casted shadow of her and the wings in to the water.
I think the moon needs a brighter color, cause she is in the midle of nowhere, where there are no city lights or cars to light up the place and in places like this, the moon is always glowing a lot unless there is a bad weather. So more highlight to the moon would help.
I dont recomend add a texture to the full image cause it gives it a flat look. like a printed photo or canvas. it takes the realistic part away
Also the wood behind her could use more highlights near her. a reflection of her glow.
I woul also find a way to blend the flower more to the image. the color is too strong for such a dark place
A longer dress would make her look better too, its kind of des'proportionated from the body.

Overall lovely work, great pose. I recommend add a veil on her head as she is a bride as far as i understand :)

Great work, keep it coming! And for the watchers here, dont copy or steal the artists, come up with your own concept, practice, practice and practice and share with love :dalove:

ps:sorry my bad gramar
2 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

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